Tony: hence home would you ever come to a football match without your kit you are football players yet you come with no kit you there what’s your occupation?
John: I’m a amateur footballer sir looking to be a pro.
Fred: where is your football kit what are you doing with your best clothes.
James: Well compared to a footballer you may call me a cobbler.
Fred: well that’s not good enough for me what is your trade.
James: I told you sir earlier.
fred: that’s not what I asked for answer my question.
James: I’m a ametuer footballer but I’m also a shoe polisher. If ever your shoes are dirty I can polish them for you sir.
Tony: what? How dare you be so rude that is an insult to me.
james: why, sir cobble you.
Tony: you are a cobbler are you.
james: sir, I’m a man that fixes old shoes. When they are ruined sir.
Tony: why are you not working now but you come to lead a football team.
james: I’m here to make there shoes wear out and make more money.
fred: what are you celebrating what victory does he hold? Who has he conquered this time. Are you men stupid all these years you have been trying your best to impress him, you get injured and and brake a leg. Yet he sits on his seat and watches all of this happen and you respect him.
Exit John and James
tony: go to the Capitol and see if the statues are decorated in honour of Caesar.
fred: I don’t think I can sneak in, the feast of Lupercal is on.
tony: it doesn’t matter. Make sure non of the statues represent Caesar. Go and make everyone think he’s bad and I’ll do the same then he may come down to the pitch.
THEY EXIT IN DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS.
October 13, 2015 at 9:30 pm
Gentrit,
We looked at this in class and you were given feedback to think carefully about how your characters would relate to their original incarnations. Spend some time planning this – how will you reveal the Caesar like character?
Please plan these elements and re-draft.