It was a normal Monday Steve woke up at 6am, he brushed his teeth had a shower and ate his cereal for breakfast. When he finished it was about 6:45am and he leaves the house and got to training at about 7:15am, he got changed then started training coach said “we will start games now”. Half way through the game Steve was put up against 6ft Bob, Bob was very aggressive and hated losing the game. Steve was terrified he was about to jum… “BOOM”.The crowd went silent you would hear a few owww’s but nothing else. Bob had flown into Steve. He felt a little pain in his knee and the next thing he knew was his knee was hanging off his leg on a tiny piece of skin. He began to scream and cry, later he was rushed to hospital. Once he got to the hospital it was empty no doctors, no nurse no one. Everyone that was with him slowly faded away and he was left alone in a deserted hospital. A mysterious figure began to appear in the distance but as it gets closer it looks as if he is shape shifting like a shapeshifter. But Steve says “that can’t be possible”. He hears a voice saying “don’t worry I am only here to help”. He was terrified of this monstrous creature but he couldn’t move and was put to sleep by the strange figure. He woke up hours later his leg was fixed but he had a scar. The weird thing is that when he woke up his parents and the doctors were all their. His family asked him if he was alright because he was jumping around in his operation. So Steve thought about it for a while and he realised he had a nightmare during his operation…

May 9, 2016 at 4:10 pm
Gentrit,
Where should your paragraphs begin and end? Did you write a plan?